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Aspen Hell Lands 8/8

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Title: Aspen Hell Lands
Author: outuendo_11
For: [info]privatesmile   for the secret admiration fic exchange thing
Pairing: surprise
Rating: adult
Disclaimer: I don't own these characters.
Summary: Andy's parents win a free trip to the Aspen Highlands, but will the vacation be ruined when someone from Andy's past happens to be inhabiting the same hotel?
A/N: Thank you so much [info]flitterbug18 for giving me fab ideas and helping me write this. :)


 

 

 

Chapter 8/Epilogue

New York. City of possibilities.

Andy never dreamed in a million years that her life would be as it was now.

As her wife helped her into a Cartier necklace designed specifically for her, she adjusted her La Perla bra. Soft hands moved over the lace of her black bra, lips tugging gently at her ear.

“We have to get going, Miranda. I wouldn’t want you to be late to the ever popular Black and White Ball.” Andy laughed, wrapping her arms around Miranda, who was behind her, as best she could, allowing her love to kiss her neck.

“You’re right.” Miranda hummed. And just as Andy turned in her lovers embrace to kiss her, the girls came charging into the room. All three of their precious girls.

“Mommy!” Isabella tottered towards Miranda, reaching for her, wanting her to pick her up.

“How come she always goes to you?” Andy asked, playfully miffed as she watched Miranda sweep Isabella up into her arms. Andy let her hand run through her daughter’s long brunette hair.

“She likes me better, don’t you Bella?” Miranda grinned at her daughter, kissing her on her cheek as she snuggled into her mother’s neck.

“Mom, can I go to Katie’s tonight?” Caroline asked, her fingers working fast as they flew across her blackberry’s keypad.

“No, you’re going to stay here and help Cassidy babysit.” Miranda responded. When Caroline looked like she was going to protest Miranda sent her a glare. “If you don’t, you’re not going to Blake’s birthday.”

Caroline sighed.

“Hey, girls?” Andy cut in, “would you mind giving Bella something to eat before you put her to sleep. I don’t think she ate at all at dinner, did you sweetheart?” Andy felt her forehead. “Are you feeling all right, sweetheart?” Oh God, she sounded like her mom.

Bella nodded, “I okay, mommy.” She smiled at Andy and reached out to her, sensing that Miranda needed to finish getting ready. Andy took her and watched as her wife moved to her closet. She was looking for the new shoes that her new assistant had delivered for her earlier today.

“Girls, why don’t you take Bella downstairs? Mommy and Andy need to get ready, okay?” Miranda called from the closet, appearing moments later with her heels in hand.

Andy still needed to fix her hair. She allowed Cassidy to take Bella from her, making sure to kiss all three girls before sending them off.

Miranda’s lips were on hers the instant their daughter’s departed. “Go finish getting ready.” She kissed her again and sent her away with a swift pat on the butt.

Yes, this was not at all how Andy had imagined her life would be.

After sneaking around the city, moving from hotel to hotel on their lunch breaks, sneaking to little known restaurants, the paparazzi had quickly caught on. Before long it was impossible for them to pretend like nothing was happening. And it became too much to be apart. They were married in Boston; the girls gradually began accepting Andy. Miranda and Andy were so smitten together that they had agreed a baby was the next logical step and thus Isabella had come into their lives and Andy didn’t know how she could love someone so much. She had had no idea that she could love someone so much.

Miranda was equally besotted with the little girl, who was now three.

It all seemed too perfect and Andy could only thank the-powers-that-be that had landed she and Miranda at that same Ritz-Carlton on that same weekend.

It might not have happened if they hadn’t had that chance encounter and as cheesy as it sounded, Andy would have it no other way.

Comments

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[info]unfortunateggs wrote:
Feb. 22nd, 2009 07:15 pm (UTC)
I liked this! Well done! :))
[info]outuendo_11 wrote:
Feb. 22nd, 2009 07:21 pm (UTC)
I'm glad you liked it. :) Thanks for reading this fun little Valentine fluffy story thing. :)
[info]tanama30 wrote:
Feb. 22nd, 2009 07:35 pm (UTC)
i loved it wonderful fic
[info]outuendo_11 wrote:
Feb. 22nd, 2009 07:47 pm (UTC)
Thank you! Glad you loved. :)
[info]kdsusa3 wrote:
Feb. 22nd, 2009 07:56 pm (UTC)
Awesome ending darlin'. I loved this story.
[info]outuendo_11 wrote:
Feb. 22nd, 2009 07:57 pm (UTC)
Glad you liked! Thanks for reading!
[info]vinjii wrote:
Feb. 22nd, 2009 08:07 pm (UTC)
This was awesome. Like cheesy awesome!
[info]outuendo_11 wrote:
Feb. 22nd, 2009 08:08 pm (UTC)
Cheesey? Yes. It's a Valentine's Day fic after all.....duh.
[info]amada_tarra wrote:
Feb. 22nd, 2009 08:09 pm (UTC)
I loved it! Nice ending :)
[info]outuendo_11 wrote:
Feb. 22nd, 2009 08:10 pm (UTC)
Glad you liked the ending. :)
[info]gin781 wrote:
Feb. 22nd, 2009 08:53 pm (UTC)
This was a great story! I enjoyed it! Great way to end it! :D
[info]outuendo_11 wrote:
Feb. 22nd, 2009 09:12 pm (UTC)
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed. :)
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[info]sherlock_adams wrote:
Feb. 22nd, 2009 09:13 pm (UTC)
Aw, I loved this. Too cute! =)
[info]outuendo_11 wrote:
Feb. 22nd, 2009 09:15 pm (UTC)
Right?

:)

Hey potato, so your Kymiranda is coming along still...kind of...I have it in my mind but I've been too busy this weekend this weekend to get more down, but just know it's coming. I promise. lol.
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[info]abilena wrote:
Feb. 22nd, 2009 10:01 pm (UTC)
That was Wonderful, darling. I really enjoyed this story. I like the name Isabella.
[info]outuendo_11 wrote:
Feb. 22nd, 2009 11:58 pm (UTC)
I like that name too. :) Glad you liked.
[info]perks123 wrote:
Feb. 22nd, 2009 10:47 pm (UTC)
Great story...with a lovely ending...thank you.
[info]outuendo_11 wrote:
Feb. 22nd, 2009 11:58 pm (UTC)
You're welcome, but thank you for reading and reviewing. :)
[info]hannawillows wrote:
Feb. 22nd, 2009 11:26 pm (UTC)
Awww so cute! It feels like a fairytale =]
Great job! ^^
[info]outuendo_11 wrote:
Feb. 22nd, 2009 11:58 pm (UTC)
A fairytale! Ha. Well I'm glad you liked it and thought it was cute! Thank you.
[info]lonevoice_89 wrote:
Feb. 22nd, 2009 11:57 pm (UTC)
cheesy? yes but i happen to like cheese, great story i finaly got around to reading it all and i love it!
[info]outuendo_11 wrote:
Feb. 22nd, 2009 11:57 pm (UTC)
Glad you liked it, cheese and all. :)
[info]punky_96 wrote:
Feb. 23rd, 2009 12:26 am (UTC)
*sigh* it's over. i loved it, but now i'm a little sad. it was so nice to tune in everyday for an update.

i can't wait for more from you.
[info]outuendo_11 wrote:
Feb. 23rd, 2009 01:28 am (UTC)
:( I know it is sad because I think the ending warrants something more, maybe...but anyway I'm glad you liked it so much and liked the updates. :)

Hopefully I'll have more for you soon! You're awesome!
[info]jintymac wrote:
Feb. 23rd, 2009 01:14 am (UTC)
Aww, I loved your sweet happy ending ;-)

Thanks for the journey :D
[info]outuendo_11 wrote:
Feb. 23rd, 2009 01:27 am (UTC)
You're welcome! I'm glad you were here through the whole thing reading and commenting! You're fabulous.
[info]monetfun wrote:
Feb. 23rd, 2009 03:49 am (UTC)
That was so good. I love how you ended this story. I am such a sucker for Mirandy children. Thank you for writing such a great story and I am looking forward to your next story whatever that may be.
[info]outuendo_11 wrote:
Feb. 23rd, 2009 04:13 am (UTC)
Aww I know Mirandy kids are SO cute! Glad you enjoyed it and I do hope you like at least one of my next to adventures...haha
[info]bytheguillotine wrote:
Feb. 23rd, 2009 04:17 am (UTC)
Awww, it's too wonderful, I loved it!
[info]outuendo_11 wrote:
Feb. 23rd, 2009 04:20 am (UTC)
It is too wonderful...sigh. Haha.
[info]torie20md wrote:
Feb. 23rd, 2009 05:11 am (UTC)
Very good. I liked the tension built up by missed opportunities. Great job.
[info]outuendo_11 wrote:
Feb. 23rd, 2009 05:11 am (UTC)
Thanks! Glad you liked it. :)
[info]slv1987 wrote:
Feb. 23rd, 2009 09:24 pm (UTC)
aaahh squeee!! Gotta love it :) so glad they got together in the end. Ah shucks i feel all happy now!
[info]outuendo_11 wrote:
Feb. 23rd, 2009 10:01 pm (UTC)
Good, I was going for happy all over feeling in the end. :)

Glad you like it! And you aren't sad it's over.
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[info]dragonwine wrote:
Feb. 24th, 2009 04:10 am (UTC)
I really adore your writing. I think you really steer us directly into those emotions that make us connect to Miranda/Andrea and the depths of their affection toward each other. There is some sweet magic in the manner in which you portray them domestically in this final part of Aspen Hell Lands, while still maintaining their respective characterizations.

I really would have loved to see that Boston wedding and how Isabella officially came into their lives.

I love romance. And more than anything I think I'm a quiet sucker for warm-fuzzy endings. Thanks for giving that to me. Continued success. :)
[info]outuendo_11 wrote:
Feb. 24th, 2009 04:13 am (UTC)
I'm glad you like. :)

Yeah I couldn't help myself...I just had to end it all warm and fuzzy like and I know I could have elaborated, but I feel some things are more fun for the reader to imagine. ;)

I could see this continuing, but I refuse to do. Ha.

Thanks for being a fabulous commentor!
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[info]duwinter wrote:
Feb. 24th, 2009 03:52 pm (UTC)
Ooooooo! Fluffy ending! I liked this story a lot. I thought that the characterizations of the earlier chapters were spot on and that the ending was just right. Thank you for sharing it and I look forward to reading more of your work in future.
[info]outuendo_11 wrote:
Feb. 25th, 2009 03:17 pm (UTC)
I am so glad you liked and it is hard for these characters to stay in character and somehow get together at the same time so I'm glad that you believe I accomplished that. :)

Thank you for reading this cute little Valentine fic. Haha.

You're awesome!
[info]streepfan wrote:
Feb. 24th, 2009 06:40 pm (UTC)
Oh my god i love !!!!
it's great, juste love , juste a family !
Thank you for your fanfic !!!
[info]outuendo_11 wrote:
Feb. 25th, 2009 03:17 pm (UTC)
...I love you, too?

Ha. Thank you for reviewing! I'm glad you enjoyed this crazy ride.

And you're welcome. :)
[info]theruinedcastle wrote:
Feb. 26th, 2009 02:19 am (UTC)
I finally got around to reading all of this, and I'm almost glad I waited since you left a gazillion cliffies!

I love when Andy and Miranda are in the car on the way to the hotel -- the tension between them was very well written. It was also nice to see Miranda so vulnerable afterward. You seem to tap into their emotions easily and it shows in your writing.

The last chapter is really cute, and I think you touched just enough on how their relationship got to where they are now. As much as I enjoy seeing all the little details, I also enjoy it when the author leaves some things to the reader's imagination.
[info]outuendo_11 wrote:
Feb. 26th, 2009 02:24 am (UTC)
Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed this fun little bit of almost-fluff. I love those moments of vulnerabilty and I love seeing Miranda break and so I'm so glad that you can see that in my writing.

And I'm also glad you liked the end. I like leaving stuff up to people's imaginations, so I'm glad you liked that as well. I like doing those snapshots instead of over doing the details.

But anyway THANK YOU SO much for leaving this fabulous comment. I am so glad you took some time to read this and review! You're awesome.
[info]pure_ecstasy6 wrote:
Feb. 28th, 2009 03:26 pm (UTC)
oh my gosh! this was seriously amazing.

i just love happy endings :)

cheers for writing such a wonderful fic.

keep up the amazing work.

:) x
[info]outuendo_11 wrote:
Feb. 28th, 2009 03:58 pm (UTC)
Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed this!

I hope you keep reading! I hope my work stays amazing...haha.
[info]curiousleigh wrote:
Mar. 1st, 2009 10:37 pm (UTC)
*clapping* WHoo Hoo. Thank you for writing, I liked this story very much.
(Anonymous) wrote:
Jan. 15th, 2010 02:45 am (UTC)
Aspen
Very much enjoyed this story. Well written. Thanks for writing and sharing.
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